Idaho Grade 4 English

Compare who tells two versions of a scene

Pronouns can help identify a narrator, but a useful comparison also explains whose experience the story presents. These two short versions keep the same events while changing the narrator’s position. They introduce a selected point-of-view focus before students apply it to longer stories.

Curriculum source: Idaho Content Standards for English Language Arts/Literacy, January 2022, from the Idaho Department of Education standards directory.

Idaho Grade 4 references for this activity

Idaho’s current English document includes Grade 4 expectations across reading, writing, language, speaking, and listening. The expectations selected here support this activity; use the whole document and the school’s sequence for wider coverage.

These are selected grade-level expectations from Idaho’s current English standards. Activity labels describe a teaching focus rather than reproduce complete requirements. Read the linked grade-level document, including the reading, writing, language, speaking, and listening sections, alongside the school’s curriculum sequence.

A worked Grade 4 reading and writing activity

This original classroom example is separate from official assessment questions.

Version A: I held my drawing behind the folder as the class prepared its display. I worried that the smudged corner would spoil it. When Mira asked to see the picture, I turned the folder toward her.

Version B: Noah held his drawing behind the folder as the class prepared its display. He worried that the smudged corner would spoil it. When Mira asked to see the picture, he turned the folder toward her.

Try the activity

Identify the narrator’s position in each version. Compare the events and the thoughts the reader receives. Explain whether Version B tells the reader what Mira is thinking. Support the comparison with details from the two passages rather than label every third-person narrator all-knowing.

Follow the reasoning

Version A is told by the person holding the drawing: I and my present that character’s own experience. Version B names Noah and uses he and his, presenting the scene in third person. Both versions describe the same drawing, worry, question, and action. Both give access to Noah’s worry about the smudge. Version B does not state Mira’s thoughts; it reports that she asks to see the picture. Third-person narration here does not mean the passage reveals every character’s private thinking.

Notice what needs more practice

A character’s spoken words do not by themselves identify the narrator. If a third-person story includes dialogue such as "I like your drawing," the I belongs to the speaking character. Also avoid assuming that Mira wants to criticize the picture: no motive is stated. Describe the information the narrator actually gives. The names and pronouns establish a useful starting point, but the comparison should connect narration with what the reader learns about the scene.

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Use the next session to build independence

1. Locate the narrator’s I or the third-person name and pronouns.
2. Compare the events that stay the same in both versions.
3. Identify whose thoughts are stated and whose are not.

Rewrite the scene from Mira’s first-person position. Preserve the shared observable events, but decide what Mira thinks before she asks about the drawing. Mark those added thoughts as part of the new fictional version rather than facts established by the original passages. Compare how the new narrator changes the reader’s understanding. Then apply the same questions to two classroom stories: who tells each story, what can that narrator reveal, and which details support the comparison? This short pair introduces the focus; it is not a substitute for reading complete grade-level texts.

For more general reading and writing resources, visit the Grade 4 English Online Center.

Idaho Grade 4 English: useful planning questions

Does third-person narration always reveal every character’s thoughts?

No. This third-person version states Noah’s worry but does not state Mira’s thoughts. Explain the information supplied by the particular story rather than assume its narrator knows everything.

Where are the complete state requirements?

Idaho’s current English document includes Grade 4 expectations across reading, writing, language, speaking, and listening. The expectations selected here support this activity; use the whole document and the school’s sequence for wider coverage. The school’s sequence also includes reading, writing, speaking, listening, and language work beyond this example.