Selecting and Integrating Evidence

Your judgment about which side is stronger only counts if you can point to proof. On this essay, proof comes straight from the two passages in front of you. Learning to pull the right details and slide them smoothly into your sentences is what turns a claim into a convincing argument.

Integrating evidence means choosing specific details from the passages and weaving them into your own sentences by quoting or paraphrasing. You are not copying whole paragraphs; you are picking the sharpest facts, examples, or phrases and connecting them to the point you are making.

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Choosing the Right Evidence

Not every sentence in a passage is worth citing. Look for the details that carry the most weight — a statistic, a concrete example, an expert’s statement, a clear cause-and-effect claim. These are the pieces that show an author’s argument is well supported. When you are arguing that one passage is stronger, quote the solid evidence it uses; when you point out that the other passage is weaker, quote the vague or emotional lines it leans on. Aim for a few well-chosen pieces rather than a pile of them. Two sharp quotes that you explain clearly beat six quotes dropped in without comment. Always tie the detail back to your thesis, so the reader sees why it matters.

Quoting and Paraphrasing Smoothly

You can bring evidence in two ways. Quoting uses the author’s exact words inside straight quotation marks: the author warns that costs will “double within a decade.” Paraphrasing puts the idea in your own words: the author predicts costs will rise sharply over ten years. Use a short quote when the exact wording matters; paraphrase when you just need the idea. Either way, blend it into your sentence rather than dropping it in alone — introduce it with a few words like “the author points out that” or “according to Passage A.” Then, crucially, explain it. A quote never speaks for itself; your job is to say what it proves.

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A Routine for Using Evidence

1. Pick the strongest details — facts, examples, expert statements.
2. Decide whether to quote exact words or paraphrase the idea.
3. Blend the evidence into your own sentence with a short lead-in.
4. Explain how the evidence supports your thesis.

Practice

1. Where does evidence for this essay come from?
2. Name two kinds of details worth citing.
3. What is the difference between quoting and paraphrasing?
4. When should you use a direct quote?
5. Is it better to use many quotes or a few well-explained ones?
6. What must you always do after presenting evidence?

Answers

1. From the two passages you are given.
2. Any two: statistics, examples, expert statements, cause-and-effect claims.
3. Quoting uses exact words; paraphrasing puts the idea in your own words.
4. When the author’s exact wording matters.
5. A few well-explained ones.
6. Explain how it supports your thesis.

Where This Fits in Your RLA Prep

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